Practice Comic Drawing

So, I cant really draw anything big, but I have this, a "doodle" on a piece of paper. Its not much, but what i'm really hoping for is some criticism, since I know things are wrong with it, i just cant see them. I am trying to get away from anime and into comics, so i have tried putting in more lines for the nose and mouth, making the eyes more realistic, etc..., but it still seems very anime-y. Please help.